ext_291207 ([identity profile] chapbook.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gayalondiel_bak 2011-10-29 06:25 pm (UTC)

John has a long road ahead of him. :(

I would love to see him recover almost completely, but I suspect RL is seldom so kind. So it will be interesting to follow the balance you strike in coming chapters. The dialogue between Sherlock and Mycroft sounds right; I can hear the differences in their voices. And the conclusions both men come to seem realistic. Even if the hamster lived to a venerable old age, Sherlock would find it quite difficult to give John the specialized care he needs right now.

May I ask if a particular Lied ohne Worte inspired this story?

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

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