Oh my. This is a very believable next chapter to The Great Game. You have taken the characters into consideration and thrust them into a realistic situation after the bomb goes off. All the symptoms of John's brain injury ring true too. This is very good and I am looking forward to your next instalment.
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Date: 2011-05-23 05:59 pm (UTC)This is a very believable next chapter to The Great Game. You have taken the characters into consideration and thrust them into a realistic situation after the bomb goes off. All the symptoms of John's brain injury ring true too.
This is very good and I am looking forward to your next instalment.